Hey guys I just made my first ever video ever, and it's about AoC :)
Tausomaki
Member, Alpha One, Adventurer
LOVE THE GAME !
I would appreciate if you would check it out and let me know how bad it is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhQrPTiOwaU
I would appreciate if you would check it out and let me know how bad it is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhQrPTiOwaU
Don't take life to seriously. It's not like you're going to get out alive
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Comments
Here's a bit of feedback:
WOW!
For a first video this is actually really good. Definitely some rough edges but kudos, my man. I can totally see that your own style is developing, which means you have potential to grow your own space on youtube without being stuck in someone else's shadow.
This video is a bit too long. Especially if you're going for chaotic humor - I'd suggest that next time, you should break this up into subtopics and release them as separate videos.
AND DON'T BE AFRAID OF YOUR SENSE OF HUMOUR. It's great.
I hate my voice cuz my english is not my native language so when I hear it I cringe.
I will admit that I made the thumbnail on a fly... soooo I kinda don't know what good thumbnail looks like.
I hate clickbaits in tittle and thumbnails on YT which lies about content in a video... I Hope I will never do that consciously
I will take all tips to heart !
03:41
I was a little confused by the "non forced faction MMO RPG". What are the factions? There are religions, social groups, guilds and grouping by shared node survival interests. Are you counting these as factions?
The video does go on to explain a little, but as a section heading calling them "factions" felt misleading.
You have no reason to worry about your English - I understood completely and your natural enthusiasm for what is shaping up to be a great game was fantastic to listen to.
I remember the actor Jeremy Irons recounting a time (in his 30's?) when John Hurt advised him to tell younger actors to listen to playbacks of their voice as a way of sabotaging their career prospects and getting more work for themselves. Listening to playbacks of your own voice is a common way to damage your confidence. Many of us think we sound like (a bass/baritone) Barry White but in reality we sound more like Kermit the frog!
I really don't wanna sounds official and sluggish.
"I was a little confused by the "non forced faction MMO RPG". What are the factions?"
Yeah I am sorry I should have explain that a lil bit better...
I wanted to introduce node civilizations as factions which you may or may not to join
my apologize